I thought I knew,
This just doesn't feel right,
Without You
I tried so hard,
I miss that voice.
Should I erase these memories from my heart?
The times we enjoyed
All the good times we had,
are gone just like that
Just like a beginning,
coming to an end
I didn't know
that I would miss it this much.
As we grow old,
I hope it remains as such
I hope to see you and your face again,
but you can't pull the brakes on a runaway train
So I guess this is goodbye,
from the times i ever said Hi
(Missing my primary school life)
4 comments:
This would be more perfect if you send it to your girlfriend. Okay, just kidding. But nice poem..
I agree with what Jie Han had said. It sounds more for your lover that you will soon be leaving. But good poem anyways, very creative. Good job!
DISAGREE and a HALF. It can be given to your best friend or your girlfriend. Anyways, not a bad job for a first timer.
Hi Kevyn
Good attempt,pretty well written for a first timer. Try sending it out for a poem contest. Who knows you might win something & boost your morale. Keep on writing!!
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